The legend of Nuwa_小學作文

The legend of Nuwa

Long long ago a goddess Nuwa, had magic powers but she was very lonely. The Earth was beautiful but silent. She flew and flew in the peaceful sky until she was tired and she stopped at a nearby river. She looked into the water and saw her reflection. An idea came to her.

 

She grabbed a handful of wet mud and made it into a doll. The doll became alive. Nuwa decided to make more and more. She called the doll-Human. The goddess then had another idea. She divided them into men and women. That way, they could form a family and have children.

 

Years went by, when suddenly……the sky collapsed! Rain poured as storm came thundering from the sky and flooded the mountains. Seeing her children drown, Nuwa made rafts for them. She decided to fix the sky insteadtated of watching her children drown and die. She used some colorful, round rocks and flew to the sky. Still there was a big gap. Next, she cut off the turtle’s legs and placed them up. After all this hard-work done, she felt exhausted but still kept going. With all her spirit, the sky was mended and her children were safe.

附上指導老師評語：

Dear Elsa

What a lovey story! You have really captured the wonderful time when human beings were created. I especially love your description of the storm.

Congratulations!

很久以前，一位女神女媧，擁有魔法力量，但她非常孤獨。地球很美，但很安靜。她在寧靜的天空中飛來飛去，直到她累了，她在附近的一條河邊停了下來。她看向水中，看到了自己的倒影。她萌生了一個想法。

她抓起一把濕漉漉的泥巴，把它做成一個洋娃娃。娃娃活了過來。女媧決定做越來越多的。她稱娃娃為人類。然后女神有了另一個想法。她把他們分為男人和女人。這樣，他們就可以組建一個家庭并生孩子。

歲月流逝，突然間......天空坍塌了！傾盆大雨，暴風雨從天而降，淹沒了群山?？吹剿暮⒆友退?，女媧為他們做了木筏。她決定修復天空，而不是看著她的孩子溺水和死亡。她用了一些五顏六色的圓形巖石，飛向天空。仍然有很大的差距。接下來，她砍掉了的腿，把它們放了起來。在完成所有這些艱苦的工作之后，她感到筋疲力盡，但仍然繼續(xù)前進。她全神貫注地，天空得到了修復，她的孩子安全了。

親愛的艾爾莎 多么可愛的故事！你真的捕捉到了人類被創(chuàng)造的美好時光。我特別喜歡你對風暴的描述。祝賀！