(一) 十二歲的我開始意識(shí)到,其實(shí)每個(gè)人都很寂寞。
我想如果時(shí)間肯慢一點(diǎn),也許我會(huì)把自己打理得很好。但時(shí)間仍是行如 流水,它視每一個(gè)在它身邊的人都是自己的過客,無論誰向它祈求什么,時(shí) 間仍如流水般匆忙流走。
于是,像我這樣慢性子的女生就開始覺得追不上時(shí)間,它走得太快了, 所以我還沒能明白什么是什么時(shí),什么就消失了。我變得很慢很蝸牛,一邊 用筆記下不想忘記的東西,一邊去追趕像被我落下的路程,有多少人看著風(fēng) 風(fēng)火火的我跑過身邊,消失在了路的盡頭。
(二) 開學(xué)后沒多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間,很多人都知道了一班有一個(gè)很像蝸牛的女生,短短 的頭發(fā),長(zhǎng)的不是很好看但還算清秀,愛穿一身的校服,有一個(gè)奇怪的名字 叫做訸雪。 一個(gè)很不符合我性格的女生,尹諾。
這是我在班里認(rèn)識(shí)的第一個(gè)女生,我們只是一見面就沒有緣故地互相微 笑,兩個(gè)人手里都握著一盒濃濃的奶茶,她的是巧克力加奶油,很香;而我 的卻是藍(lán)莓檸檬混合的奇怪味道。我晃了晃那盒藍(lán)色奶茶,說,我喜歡復(fù)雜 的東西。
我們就成了好朋友,一只兔子和一只蝸牛。 同時(shí),那個(gè)一個(gè)有著非同一般冰冷眼瞳的男生毫無聲息地走進(jìn)我的視線 ,那個(gè),是喬燁吧。
第一次觸到他的目光時(shí),仿佛手中的奶茶已經(jīng)結(jié)成了冰 一樣。那雙眸子,使我在十四歲有了第一次的震撼。
蝸牛的心,也開始突然 跳動(dòng)加快起來。 我開始無意識(shí)地咀嚼起喬燁這個(gè)在我眼中非同尋常的一切。
(二) 軍訓(xùn)結(jié)束之后,老班開始排座。老班看了看我,用那沾了好多年粉筆灰 的手一揮,指著一個(gè)稍后的位置說你就坐在那里吧。
我慢悠悠地走過去,看 了看我的同桌。 身材高高大大的,嘴里正哼著那首《我不做大哥好多年》,末了,又輕 蔑地瞅了我一眼。
我坐下轉(zhuǎn)過頭去說我叫訸雪。 等了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間,我的同桌停止了哼歌,說我叫梧俁……你沒事少和我說 話啊! 即使你不說我也不會(huì)去招惹你!我在心里悄悄地說。
因?yàn)椋蚁矚g安靜 啊。 尹諾則不一樣,正和她的新同桌聊得火熱,從上海扯到澳大利亞,真佩 服她的理解能力和聯(lián)想能力啊。
把目光收回的時(shí)候,我才發(fā)現(xiàn)喬燁就坐在我 的前面。 我用中指輕輕觸了一下喬燁的背,手指立刻充滿了冰冷的感覺。
喬燁回 過頭來,冰冷而安靜地看著我。那么安靜的表情,讓我的聲音顫抖起來。
你好……我叫…… 訸雪。我已經(jīng)知道了。
喬燁的聲音很好聽,雖然有些微微的嘶啞,但卻很輕很靜,像是林俊杰 唱歌時(shí)聲音的空靈。我遲鈍地想 ……。
開頭萬能公式 1. 開頭萬能公式一:名人名言 有人問了,“我沒有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語名言?”,很好辦:編! 原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦!而且沒準(zhǔn)將來我們就是名人呢!對(duì)吧? 經(jīng)典句型: A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (適用于已記住的名言) It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (適用于自編名言) 更多經(jīng)典句型: As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 2. 開頭萬能公式二:數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì) 原理:要想更有說服力,就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來說明。
原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的,可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型: According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起來這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的,其實(shí)都是編造出來的,下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造: Honesty:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車。 Youth:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,在某個(gè)大學(xué),學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 更多句型: A recent statistics shows that … 結(jié)尾萬能公式 1. 結(jié)尾萬能公式一:如此結(jié)論 說完了,畢竟要?dú)w納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷,領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論,到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類的話,我們馬上停止開小差,等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說結(jié)束語。
也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果讀者很難“顯而見之”,但說無妨,就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了! 更多過渡短語: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型: Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… 2. 結(jié)尾萬能公式二:如此建議 如果說“如此禒撫操幌鬲呵叉童常闊結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話,那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了,因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽! Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. 這里的虛擬語氣用得很經(jīng)典,因?yàn)榭脊俦緛斫?jīng)常考這個(gè)句型,而如果我們自己寫出來,你說考官會(huì)怎么想呢? 更多句型: Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.。
萬能開頭 一篇文章通常可分為三個(gè)部分,即開頭、正文和結(jié)尾。
這三個(gè)部分安排是否得體,直接影響到文章的質(zhì)量。 文章的開頭一般來說應(yīng)盡量做到開門見山,用簡(jiǎn)單明白的敘述引出文章的話題,使讀者了解文章要談?wù)撌裁矗幌掠谝鹱x者的興趣。
作文常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種: 1.開門見山,揭示主題 文章一開頭,就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎樣度假)的開頭是: I Spent my last vacation happily. 下面是題為"Honesty"(談?wù)\實(shí))一文中的開頭:Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people. 2.交代人物、事情、時(shí)間或環(huán)境開頭 在文章的開頭,先把人物、事件和環(huán)境交待清楚。
例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的開頭: The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us. 3. 回憶性的開頭 用回憶的方法來開頭。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的開頭是: I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 4.概括性的開頭 即對(duì)要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個(gè)概括性的介紹。
如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(讀書的快樂)的開頭: People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. 5.介紹環(huán)境式的開頭 即開頭利用自然景物或自然環(huán)境引出要介紹的事物。如“An Accident”(一場(chǎng)事故)的開頭是: It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner. 6.交待寫作目的的開頭。
在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的,如通過文章要表?yè)P(yáng)誰,批評(píng)誰,或說明一個(gè)什么問題等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的開頭: In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control. 萬能結(jié)尾 1.活動(dòng)類. Never before has xxx活動(dòng) been concerned much as it is today ! As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did something useful to improve ………… 2.好壞對(duì)比 Although every coin has its two sides, I think there are more advantages than disadvantages to cancel the long May Day holiday and shorten it into only one day. 3.父母幫助子女/老師幫助學(xué)生 As the old saying goes, “To give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; to teach a man to fish, and you feed him for a lifetime”. As far as I'm concerned, parents should help their children to adapt themselves to society rather than shelter them from what's going on outside. 4. 關(guān)注家鄉(xiāng),關(guān)注國(guó)家的發(fā)展 Personally, I am sure we can see that China/ my hometown is getting richer and stronger and the people in our /my hometown /country will surely enjoy a happy life if all the measures above are to be taken effectively. 5. 感恩活動(dòng)的意義/ I think this is a meaningful activity, which teaches us to learn to have gratitude for the people around us. Being grateful to others is a good feeling. With it we can know how to respect our parents, the elders and teachers. With it we can learn to care for others and forgive others. Only when we are always keeping a grateful heart to others can we harvest well-being and happiness. 6.社會(huì)公益活動(dòng)的意義 From my point of view, xx活動(dòng) is obviously more than just learning; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world. That's why I'd like to take this opportunity and make the most of my special talents and interests. By doing so, I feel I can make a small contribution to society. 7.學(xué)生健康 1. To improve students' health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent themselves from being nearsighted. Poorer diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won't easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens removed, students can then keep in normal mental health. 學(xué)生健康 2. As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life 8.環(huán)保類 As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did 。
1.Our life should safe and healthy。。..so we must protect our city。
2.The city is dity ,what should we do?。。.now we must save our world.
3.Sport is very important for us。。..let us to do sport everyday.
5.Yesterday ,I had a pleasant trip with my parents。。.we also had a good time。
6.My hobby is reading books。。I think hobby could makes me to be a good child。
7.My best friend is sally。。.i think she would be my best friend in my life。
9.Yangliwei is a heroes in the china。。..I'll remember him in my heart。
11.English is my most favourite subject。。i must learn it well
12.i want to be a nurse。。.let's me study hard and to be a good nurse。
14.my school is so funny。。..my classmates are very kind of me。
有些編不出來了
一般來說應(yīng)該背一點(diǎn)精彩的句式放在開頭用以吸引閱卷老師的注意力,
讓他對(duì)你有一個(gè)比較好的第一印象,
在最后結(jié)分的時(shí)候把你的分?jǐn)?shù)向上靠
(不要小看這一靠,有時(shí)候1分就是天壤之別!)
但總體基本以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,
不要顯得太過于注重華麗的詞藻,
當(dāng)然如果你的水平足夠隨意使用復(fù)合句的話就沒有這點(diǎn)條條框框,
主要是因?yàn)槿绻愕乃讲坏郊遥?/p>
容易出現(xiàn)語法或句式的錯(cuò)誤更加令閱卷老師討厭。
樓上的兄弟說的完全不正確!
英語的作文也是和語文一樣按評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)打分的,
不是只要語法對(duì)就好,
舉一個(gè)高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)為例:
1. 本題總分為25分,按5個(gè)檔次給分。
2. 評(píng)分時(shí),先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次
的要求來衡量,確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。
3. 詞數(shù)少于 80和多于 120的,從總分中減去2分。
4. 評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5. 拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面,評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞匯用法均可接受。 6. 如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。
7. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá),對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。
3. 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。
4. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
6. 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。
3. 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。
4. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確,些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。
5. 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
6. 達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當(dāng)):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。
3. 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。
4. 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解。
5. 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容連貫。
6. 整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容。
3. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。
4. 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響了對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解。
5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。
第一檔(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容,寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。
4. 較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解。
5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。
不得分:(0分)
未能傳達(dá)給讀者仟何信息:內(nèi)容太少,無法評(píng)判;寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。
可能是你用的開頭是已經(jīng)用爛的那種啦,
網(wǎng)上找找很多很好的開頭的。
開頭 with the development of the modern society, more and more。, some people hold that。, however, some others hold that。., in my view of point,。
.結(jié)尾 in sum, there is no denying the fact that。。only in this way can we 。
此格式最適用于寫議論文了,呵呵 希望對(duì)你能有所幫助。
一般的四六集作文都是以論文,就可以借用
Recently / Nowadays xxx becomes a very heated topic。Some hold that it is good for (students/ our country等),while others take the opposite position。Ithink that it has
its advantages and disadvantades
First,it has many advantages, such as (例如說有那些優(yōu)點(diǎn),或者對(duì)什么有什么好處等)。
Also, it has many disadvantages (例如說有那些缺點(diǎn),或者對(duì)什么有什么壞處等)。
In a word, xx just like a double-edged sword, both have good effect and bad influence. So we have to look at it rationally, try to make good use of it and avoid it's disadvantage。
這樣套寫大部分都可以用,要加的東西要寫的好,理由充分的話得個(gè)80%不成問題應(yīng)該。 用于文章的開頭 1. As the proverb says… 2. It goes without saying tan… 3. Generally speaking… 4. It is quite clear than because… 5. It is often said that … 6. Many people often ask such question:“…?” 7. More and more people have come to realize… 8. There is no doubt that… 9. Some people believe that… 10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case? 11. One great man said that… 12. Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention. 13. In the past several years there has been… 14. Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether… 15. Currently there is a widespread concern that… 16. Now people in growing number are coming to realize that… 17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of … 18. Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently.
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